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The Contact page is where the money is, and nobody wrote it.

Your visitor has read the homepage, looked at the work and checked what you charge. They click Contact and find five boxes, a Submit button and a map. Here is what to put there instead.

Granth Hirapara21 October 20267 minute read

the form has a “subject” field. nobody has ever known what to type in it.

Every other page on a website gets argued over. The homepage headline goes through four rounds. The Contact page gets built by the developer on the last afternoon, from the template that came with the theme: Name, Email, Phone, Subject, Message, Submit. The headline says “Get in touch” because that is what the template said.

It is the one page a visitor opens only when they are ready to spend money, and the only page nobody wrote.

What the reader is doing on this page

By the time someone reaches Contact, they have mostly decided they might want you. What they are deciding now is whether to pay the cost of asking. The cost is real: ten minutes typing, a sales call they didn't want, the chance that nobody replies and they feel foolish for trying.

So the page has one job. Make asking feel cheap and safe. Everything on it either does that or gets in the way.

Say what happens next

The most useful sentence a Contact page can carry is the one almost none of them have: what happens after the button is pressed. Who reads the message. How soon they reply. What the reply will contain.

A dentist in Maninagar can write “Messages are read by the front desk between 9 and 7. You'll get a call back the same day with two slots to choose from.” A CA can write “We reply within one working day, usually with three questions and a fee.” Neither line is clever. Both answer the question the reader is actually asking: what am I getting into?

If you don't know what happens next at your own business, that is worth finding out before you write the page. The reader will find out either way.

Ask only what you need to reply

Every blank on a contact form is a small tax, and the reader is deciding whether you are worth paying it.

Look at your form and ask of each field: could we reply without this? You need a name, one way to reach them, and what they want. That is three fields. Everything else is for your convenience, and you are charging the reader for it.

  • Subject. Delete it. The message is the subject.
  • How did you hear about us? Ask on the call. Nobody has ever abandoned a purchase because this box was missing.
  • Company size, designation, industry. These belong in a CRM, and the reader doesn't work for your CRM.
  • Phone number, mandatory. Plenty of people would rather write than be rung. Make it optional, or offer WhatsApp instead, which in India is where most of them wanted to write to you anyway.
  • Budget range. The one exception worth keeping, if you publish prices. A reader who has seen your rates and ticks a range below them has saved you both a call.

If there are questions you genuinely need answered before you can quote, write them into the message box as a prompt, or put them on an FAQ page where they can be read without being filled in.

Give them the way they actually talk to you

For most Indian small businesses the real enquiry doesn't arrive through the form at all. It arrives on WhatsApp. Put the WhatsApp link where it can be tapped, with the hours someone is actually behind it. Put the phone number as a number that dials when touched, not as an image.

Then the address. A map is fine, but a map is not how anyone in Ahmedabad gives directions. Write the landmark: “Second floor, above the Bank of Baroda, opposite the Paldi bus stop.” Add the timings and which days you are shut. It is the same information we said belongs on your Google listing, because it is what people check before they come.

The button, and the line after it

“Submit” is a word for forms, and nobody wants to submit to anything. Write what the button does: “Send”, “Ask for a quote”, “Book a slot”. And write the line that appears after it, because the default is “Your submission has been received”, which sounds like a government portal. “Got it. Someone will call you before 6 today” is the same length and does the whole job of the page again.

The headline deserves the same attention. “Get in touch” is what a template says when nobody is home. Say what you want them to do, in your own voice. We wrote about why the eager version sounds nervous, and nowhere does it show more than here.

Ours, for what it is worth

Our Contact page is one sentence with four blanks: your name, your brand, what you need and when you need it by. Fill them in and it opens WhatsApp with the sentence ready to send, or email if you would rather. We built it that way because by the time someone reaches that page they have already done the hard part, which was deciding to ask. Typing their designation into a box shouldn't be the second hard part.

Do this on a phone, this week

Open your Contact page on your phone, as a customer would. Count the fields. Read the headline aloud. Find the line that says what happens after you press the button, and if there isn't one, write it first. Then press the button yourself and see what comes back.

It takes four minutes, and it is the cheapest fix on the whole website.

Contact page still says “Get in touch”?